Effective Fundraising Letters Are About People, Not Projects (Includes Samples & Examples)

Have you ever met a donor who liked fundingQ. What is my client's need?
infrastructure? I have. Once.A. To avoid deadly dysentery.
When I served as Director of Development for aQ. What do we presently lack to meet that
national non-profit, my organization needed a newneed?
heating and ventilation system for the nationalA. A well that supplies fresh water.
office. The cost was around $75,000, as I recall.Q. How will my clients benefit if we meet that
The executive director approached one of ourneed?
major donors, a businessman who was also aA. Live rather than die an excruciating death.
faithful supporter, and asked if he would like toContinue enjoying the benefits of full-time
partner with us. The donor promptly wrote aschooling. Continue to reach their potential
cheque for the full amount. Later on, that samephysically, socially and emotionally. Avoid many
donor made a commitment to pay for themedical complications later in life. Be productive
parking lot to be re-paved, a renovation thatmembers of society in a few years. Be able to
would cost over $25,000.help others. You get the idea.
That donor was the exception. Most donors doYour job now is to ask for funds to drill the well
not get excited about paying for sheet metalso that the children will benefit in those ways
ducts or fresh asphalt. Donors give to people, notlisted. Don't just ask for money for a well. That's
programs. Donors don't send donations by mail tojust a project. Don't show a photo of the well in
support a mission statement. They don't respondits packing crate. Show how the donor's gift will
to appeals because of your vision statement. Orhelp the children you serve. That's the people.
simply because your general fund is depleted. AndWhat about the "general fund" ask?
they are not (with rare exceptions) inspired toThe greatest challenge in this area is when you
pay for electrical bills, staples, travel costs andare requesting funds for your general fund and
plumbing repairs. Donors are people. And peoplenot for a tangible project, when you cannot
give to people, usually to help people.describe any specific benefits that are tied to a
This basic fundraising truth means that you mustparticular initiative. In these cases, you still need to
state your organizational needs in human termsdescribe your need in human terms, and you do
whenever possible. You must translate your casethis by showing your donors the view from
for support from non-profit-speak into flesh and10,000 feet instead of 10 feet..
blood. Donors want to know how their gift willLet's say you need to raise money by mail for
help the people that you serve.your general fund, to pay for salaries,
This fundraising truth still applies even if you doadministration, office supplies, postage--all the
not serve people. If your non-profit promotesthings that are needed to run a non-profit. The
nuclear arms disarmament, for example, yourview from 10 feet says you need to raise
donors want to know how their gift will end$20,000 this quarter to meet general fund
nuclear weapons testing. If you are anexpenses or you're in trouble with your board. But
animal-rights charity, your donors want to knowthe view from 10,000 feet says you need to
how their financial gift will rescue animals fromraise $20,000 to continue meeting the needs of
laboratory experiments.the people you serve.
How to say "people," not "programs"So instead of saying this:
If you are raising funds for a specific project that"Please donate to our general fund."
aims to help a particular people group (children,You say this:
seniors, single mothers, children with cerebral"Please send a gift today to our ‘Sequoia
palsy), then your job is straightforward. AskSender's Fund.' From this fund we draw the
yourself these questions:monies needed to promote our service to
1. What is my client's need?environmentalists at large, train teams, send them
2. What do we presently lack to meet that need?overseas, and handle all the tasks involved in
3. How will my client benefit if we meet thatgetting those volunteers onto the field and back
need?again in a way that promotes responsible forestry
Here is an example. Imagine that your non-profitpractices, encourages and equips local activists,
organization in South Africa runs an orphanage forand blesses the volunteer who goes."
children whose parents have died from AIDS. TheSee the difference? The fund is no longer a
children are suffering from dysentery because thegeneral fun but a fund set aside to accomplish the
local water supply is contaminated. Your solution isgoals of the organization. It serves the same
to drill a well. You need $50,000.purpose, it just has a more compelling name. This
You could send an appeal letter to yourask is worded in such a way that it covers every
supporters, asking for $50,000. Mistake.office expense from paper to payroll, yet in a
You could send an appeal letter to yourway likely to inspire and motivate donors.
supporters, asking for $50,000 for a new well.Your role as a writer of effective fundraising
Another mistake.letters is to always be looking for the human
Remember, people give to people to help people.interest story that lies beneath your immediate
Your donors want to help orphans, not drill a well.financial needs. Capture that, and you'll capture the
Drilling the well will help the orphans, but your askhearts and minds of your donors.
needs to concentrate on the orphans. Here's how© 2005 Sharpe Copy Inc.
you would answer the above three questions.